Archive: letter of relationship proof

Budget 250$ per month
Posted: 5 years ago
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Hello,

I have to write a letter for my fiancé's visa application to provide evidence of our relationship.
I am really bad storyteller and english isn't my mother tongue so I'm seeking help.

It has to be formal and sound convincing that our relationship is genuine and continuing.
the length is from one to two page.
I have been going through very difficult time, so i would like to emphasize how he was always there for me, being very supportive and I am desperately in need of him as a company.

I wrote some kind of a draft about what I want to include in the letter, I will put it below, I apologize in advance that it's very messy, I just wrote everything that came up on my mind... I am really bad at writing... If you have any advice, idea that might not be inappropriate to include from what i wrote, feel free to talk to me and we can make changes about what to write, or if you need more details or information, please let me know.

the deadline is in a week, so if you don't have enough time to write it then it's totally fine.
Let me know if you can write it, thank you, i appreciate your time.


This is the draft:

I, , am writing this letter to provide evidence for my loving relationship with my fiancé, .

I met -- for the first time through our mutual friend 'A' in (date). it was a farewell for the friend who's leaving. I remember i talked about how I havent been eating well, bad at cooking. about a week after he asked me out for dinner. we had dinner outside, and he brought a huge bag of food that he cooked for me, saying that he felt bad about what I said last time so he cooked some food for me. starting this, we spend more and more time, my feelings for him grew, .... we have been seeing each other since then,

I was going through very difficult times as I have been suffering from depression
questioning myself with unstable sense of myself for my whole life, but as mental illness is not aceepted in asian society, i never told anyone even family, i have been pretending,

first time i seek help for specialist, I started seeing psychologist and psychiatrist. He was always there for me, even I was diagnosed with borderline personality disorder (BPD) and post-traumatic stress disorder (PTSD) as a rape victim.

On the day I finally got my dignosis, I had very mixed feelings as ...I called him , I told him about it, then I got home, he was crying for me. He did a lot of research about BPD and he said he felt sorry for me, cant imagine how painful It has been, I never had someone who sincerely cried for me and feels pain..for me?

With my unstable feelings and suicidal behaviors, I was sorry for him that I am burden for him, but he has been patient with me and believed in me that I will get better, supported me.

He moved into my place in (date),

he was the one who convinced me to talk to my family about the situation, so i told them, when i went home last winter, It was the first time that my family actually saw how serious my state was, but they were weirdly very prepared, later i found out that it was him talked to my parents before and explained them how I will be like and what they should do in response to my ... my parents really trust him, we met each other's parents, we promised our future together, and got permission from both parents.then i came back to (country), i dont think i can find someone else like him, i really love him and it has been more than 4 months that i havent seen him,

with suicidal feelings and self-harming behaviors. it is very painful and desperate situation for me. he is the only person who i can be honest with and i really need him here with me. please consider his application. I can provide medical documents if needed. feel free to contact me for further clarification.
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Under $250
Skills:
letter writing,writing
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